Plain English Review of a Suite of Government Application Forms.

Plain English Review Example

Here’s one from a recent #plainenglish review of a suite of #government application #forms. Our much-loved, long-term client was somewhat amused albeit startled such an egregious assault on #English had escaped her review for so many years. #livingintheshadows #hidinginplainsight

Context alert:
– subheading was “Apply online” so sentence 1 is redundant
– client agreed it’s implied that incomplete applications aren’t accepted.

Feedback / improvements welcomed!